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Since the year we met, we’d become good friends. We’d face troubles together, and no matter how deep my fall was, you’d pick me up, and we’d face tomorrow together. That was always how it’d been.

This year, it was different.
You moved on, in a place, where I’d never been. You grew up so fast, leaving me amongst the few memories that we had together covered in the dust you left behind.

That was the last I saw of you.

Those days, I watched your life through your public screen. I stood in the stands, and cheered for you, but in the end, I was nothing but the audience. As your life overflowed with happiness, Maybe one day, you would spill that happiness into my life, where I watched you, with smiling eyes, but a forced smile on my face.

But the days came; and while I watched your life, I forgot to look into my own. My life fell slowly, and when I hit rock bottom, there was no one to comfort me.

These days, I still see you through your public screen. I still watch from the stands, and cheer for you. But I’m just another spectator at your concert; nothing more. Because the “you”  I knew was merely the shadow of your past.

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Um, this is um my first time submitting a deviation, and I don't think it's good but..:S
The poem was not intentionally directed at anyone, if I may add. :)
And um..special thanks to Jamie who read it first :)
XD sorry

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=julietcaesar Feb 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
A story that we see all the time, painfully repeated again and again, but that's life, y'know?

Nicely written. :thumbsup:
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:iconcher-lynnie:
Yeah, I guess so :S
Thank you ^^
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:iconcookie-jam:
I think I said this already but
Heartwrenching :)
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